Scene Break Down

This is my first scene which I have roughly annotated with stage directions and thought changes. As it is my first scene I want it to have amazing energy and purpose so the audience know who I am and who my character is. My first mini monologue is expressing my love for Rosalind and I think it is a perfect one to open this character with because the relationship between these two is so strong. I decided to be play the speech in a teasing tone, half being serious and half joking with her. My main goal for this is to cheer her up and make her realise her life isn't too bad because I love her deeply and we have each other. 




You know my father hath no child but I, nor none is             to inform
like to have: and, truly, when he dies, thou shalt
be his heir, for what he hath taken away from thy               to comfort 
father perforce, I will render thee again in
affection; by mine honour, I will; and when I break               to tease 
that oath, let me turn monster: therefore, my                       to comfort/ serious tone
sweet Rose, my dear Rose, be merry.

These are my objectives for my second mini monologue which I also use to cheer Rosalind up.